Exercise 2.1

print improvement feedback

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Suggestions and Feedback

  • A bit boring
  • Not enough contrast
  • Too long
  • Too much white space

My plan

  • Make the design throughout the manual consistent
  • Add contrast, (colours,fonts)
  • Make it shorter
  • remove the chapter numbers
  • Fix the illustrations, remove the white background.